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Joe Sugarman: the slippery slide and what to use

Create momentum one sentence at a time.

Joe Sugarman sold products through ads and wrote about how a reader moves through copy. This page covers his background, six ideas worth keeping, how to use them on a page and where they need care.

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who he was

About Joe Sugarman

Joe Sugarman is an American direct marketer and copywriter. He ran JS&A, a company that sold products through magazine and mail-order ads, and he later wrote about how those ads worked.

His best-known book on copywriting is The Adweek Copywriting Handbook. He is remembered for the slippery slide and for his attention to how a reader moves through a page.

six ideas

Six ideas that still hold

IdeaWhat it saysHow to use it now
The slippery slideEvery sentence exists to get the next one read.Read your draft aloud and cut any sentence that gives the reader a reason to stop.
The first sentenceIt must be short and easy, so the reader starts.Open with a short line that links to the headline. See headline examples.
Seeds of curiosityShort lines that promise the next point.Use them sparingly, and pay each one off. See curiosity headlines that convert.
Psychological triggersPeople respond to a set of known motives, such as curiosity and consistency.Check which motive your ad uses, and whether the proof supports it.
Copy is a conversationThe reader should feel the writer is talking to them.Write as if to one person, with plain words.
Every element has a jobThe headline, the picture and the layout all help the reader move down.Remove any element that does not help the reader reach the next one.

in practice

Using Sugarman on a page

  1. Write a headline that picks the reader, then a first line short enough to read at a glance.
  2. Give each paragraph one job and end it with a reason to read the next.
  3. Use one seed of curiosity per section, and pay it off within a paragraph or two.
  4. Read the page aloud and mark every place you would stop reading. Fix those first.

the limits

Where Sugarman needs care

  • His work comes from print ads and catalogs. Web pages scroll differently.
  • Triggers can push a reader too hard, so check that each claim has proof.
  • Long copy suits a considered purchase. Test the length in your market.
  • Take the momentum from one sentence to the next, and test the style.

reading him

Where to start reading

The Adweek Copywriting Handbook is the usual starting point. The best copywriting books page puts it in a reading order with the other masters.

the full method

Sugarman is one of eight masters

In the playbook his page covers the core idea, what to borrow today and the limit to respect. His line is create momentum one sentence at a time.

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before you go

Common questions

Who is Joe Sugarman?

An American direct marketer and copywriter who ran JS&A, a company that sold products through magazine and mail-order ads. He wrote The Adweek Copywriting Handbook.

What is the slippery slide?

Sugarman’s image for copy that pulls the reader down the page. Each sentence has one job, which is to get the next sentence read.

What are seeds of curiosity?

Short teasing lines, often at the end of a paragraph, that make the reader want the next one. They keep the reader moving.

What are Sugarman’s psychological triggers?

A set of reasons people respond to an ad, such as curiosity and the wish to be consistent. He describes them in his copywriting books.

What is the Adweek Copywriting Handbook?

Sugarman’s book on writing copy, covering how an ad is built and why readers respond.

Where does Sugarman fit in Ink & Signal?

He is one of the eight masters, with the line create momentum one sentence at a time.

keep reading

Related

Curiosity headlines that convert

Attach the gap to a stake.

Headline examples

Ten types of headline, each with a rewrite.

Best copywriting books

The books behind the eight masters, in a reading order.